提升英文寫作分數的關鍵技巧

一、靈活變換句子開頭
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一般來說,英文句子的結構多為「主詞+動詞+受詞」的形式,也就是將主詞置於句首。但若能依據情境適時調整句子的起始方式,例如運用倒裝句或以副詞開頭等技巧,便能有效提升文章的表現力與層次感。
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· You can do it well only in this way.
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→ Only in this way can you do it well.
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唯有透過這種方式,你才能將事情辦妥。
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· A young woman sat by the window.
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→ By the window sat a young woman.
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窗邊坐著一位年輕女子。
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二、避免重複使用相同詞彙
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為了讓文章表達更生動、更具感染力,在寫作時應盡量避免重複使用相同的詞語來表達相同的意思,尤其是一些過於常見的用字。例如,許多同學一提到「喜歡」,腦中立刻浮現的就是 “like”。其實,英文中有許多詞彙與片語能表達類似意涵,像是 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for 等,適時替換能讓文章更顯豐富。
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· I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
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→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
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我喜歡閱讀,而我弟弟則愛看電視。
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三、適時運用省略句
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合理且恰當地使用省略句,不僅能使文章更精煉簡潔,也能增添文采與流暢度,讓讀者更容易理解文意。
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· He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
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→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
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他或許在忙。若是如此,我晚點再打來;若不忙,我現在能見他嗎?
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· If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.
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→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.
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天氣好我們就去;天氣不好便作罷。
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· She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.
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→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
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她原本可以申請那份工作的,但她並沒有。
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四、善用分詞構句等非謂語結構
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分詞構句等非謂語結構常被視為較進階的語法,若能適當運用,能展現出對語言更熟練的掌握力,為文章增添專業感。
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· When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
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→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
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一聽到消息,大家都高興得跳了起來。
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· As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
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→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
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因為不知道她的地址,我無法與她取得聯繫。
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五、長短句交錯運用
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在英文寫作中,全篇使用長句或全用短句都容易顯得單調。較好的方式是依據文意與節奏,交替使用長句與短句,使文章段落錯落有致。如此不僅在視覺上更具美感,讀起來也更能展現語言的韻律與力度。
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At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.
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→ At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.
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中午我們在陽光下享用了野餐。稍作休息後,大家便開心唱起歌、跳起舞,有人講笑話,也有人下棋,玩得不亦樂乎。
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六、以慣用片語取代單字
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· He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up.
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→ He has made up his mind to be a teacher when he grows up.
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他已下定決心,長大後要成為一名教師。
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· He doesn’t like music.
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→ He doesn’t care much for music.
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他對音樂不太感興趣。
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· He told me that the question was now under discussion.
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→ He told me that the question was now being discussed.
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他告訴我,這個問題目前正在討論中。
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七、活用固定句型與表達
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· He was very tired. He couldn’t walk any farther.
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→ He was too tired to walk any farther.
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他累得再也走不動了。
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· The film was very interesting. Both the teachers and the students liked it.
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→ The film was so interesting that both the teachers and the students liked it.
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這部電影十分有趣,無論老師或學生都很喜歡。
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· Your son is old. He can look after himself now.
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→ Your son is old enough to look after himself now.
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你的兒子已經夠大了,現在可以照顧自己了。
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八、使用更道地的英語表達
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· Don’t worry. Be bold and try it, and you’ll learn it soon.
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→ Don’t worry. Just go for it, and you’ll get it soon.
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別擔心,放手去試,你很快就能上手。
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· Thank you for playing with us.
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→ Thank you for sharing the time with us.
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謝謝你撥空陪伴我們。
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九、綜合運用進階語法結構
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· We had to stand there to catch the offender.
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→ What we had to do was (to) stand there, trying to catch the offender.
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我們所能做的,就是站在那裡試著逮住違規者。
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· If her pronunciation is not better than her teacher’s, it is at least as good as her teacher’s.
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→ Her pronunciation is as good as, if not better than, her teacher’s.
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她的發音即使不比老師好,也絕不遜色。
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十、巧用名言佳句畫龍點睛
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寫作時若能依據主題,適切地引用一兩句名言或諺語,不僅能為文章增添深度與智慧,也能在整體評分中展現更高的語言駕馭能力,從而提升文章的層次。